Interesting topic here Micah. You may want to spend more time on how the process of the disease will cause the symptoms. Looking for the correlation between the two will ultimately lead to greater understanding and a much thorough disease entry. Also describing what we are seeing in the picture would be beneficial. You may be able to relate the picture to some of the symptoms you have stated.
Interesting topic here Micah. You may want to spend more time on how the process of the disease will cause the symptoms. Looking for the correlation between the two will ultimately lead to greater understanding and a much thorough disease entry. Also describing what we are seeing in the picture would be beneficial. You may be able to relate the picture to some of the symptoms you have stated.
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