Kalin - this topic seems much more relevant to the next section on kidneys. Of course there is a relationship between circulation and the kidneys but I think you could most likely find a relationship between circulation and all organs (since they all need blood). I think that you should find a new topic on circulatory/cardiovascular diseases and this could be your topic for kidneys which is the new system we will be covering.
As far as commenting on the glog itself - It is visually appealing and full of great information, I would have like to have seen a little bit more on the causes - like how does low blood pressure or diabetes cause the kidneys to not function properly, As well, make sure to elaborate on things that may not be well known about, for example serum creatinine - what is it? And why would it be detrimental?
Kalin - this topic seems much more relevant to the next section on kidneys. Of course there is a relationship between circulation and the kidneys but I think you could most likely find a relationship between circulation and all organs (since they all need blood). I think that you should find a new topic on circulatory/cardiovascular diseases and this could be your topic for kidneys which is the new system we will be covering.
ReplyDeleteAs far as commenting on the glog itself - It is visually appealing and full of great information, I would have like to have seen a little bit more on the causes - like how does low blood pressure or diabetes cause the kidneys to not function properly, As well, make sure to elaborate on things that may not be well known about, for example serum creatinine - what is it? And why would it be detrimental?
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